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okay, thanks people, I'll play around with it to expand/describe and add on.

hey mo. luv it but because of the talking, it is more like a short story than a poem but i like the 'tis thing. the last line is so ...

Sprinting up the hill, I thought of Joe. My best friend Joe, dead. At sixteen years old. What am I doing here? I thought. Avenging Joe, cruelly taken from an ...

that was very good! i liked the part where the spoon got used, you described it very well. you made spoons come alive, which couldn't have been as easy as ...

that was really good. but i have to ask, when she speaks human like a small child would, is that because she stopped speaking human at a young age? and ...